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From recent wedding enjoy :)

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I love the reflections in the eyes..always a strength of the old 5D and apparently the mark II. Composition's great, subject's beautiful, crop is classic, focus is spot-on. Great shot on-location!

Before I move on...let me note that I love your work and I'm very much a Photoshop nerd.

What bothers me is post-processing (I think) The blown out highlights are really a shame with a camera capable of capturing so much detail. Her skin looks pale, and the freckles are almost completely gone. (Personal preference, I never try to hide freckles, unless I'm specifically asked to.) Detail on the whites is completely gone, and the lilies would have been gorgeous.

I take it this is a summer wedding, but her hair/skin have a bit of a blue tint from the shade. I feel like this needs bit of warming.

With a photo this bright, a vignette that dark is pushing it. My first thought when i saw the thumbnail was "Whoa, fake vignette." Effects like that are most effective when you don't notice them. If you back the overall brightness down, maybe try a pale white vignette.

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Canon
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
1/50 second
F/5.6
135 mm
200
Aug 15, 2009, 2:38:51 PM

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